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Solar Producer: Rate My New Rap 1-10? (5/20/2011)

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Allow me to brake down how I got my fame/
Into 2 crystal verses and 16 heavy bars of fame/
We Now have to go back to Memory Lane/
Right about when all this new auto tune sh*t was made/
I was a student of the game trying to Adventise my name to help the game/
Jay Z thought i was lame, Kanye West thought I was ok, but the response was still the same/
I guess that was it but then I heard a voice calling my name/
It was my conscious telling me to enter the rap tournament next summer so i can Finlay not be lame/
I practiced battle rapping everyday/
I sent one of them to my english teacher and there was nothing he can say/
But then I saw my opponent it was Samuel L Ray/
He was owner of all the blood gangs, drug lanes, and best rapper in are college school Splaine/
The only possible way I can beat him if I were to put sterioids into my brain/
But it was to late to back down now I already entered my name/
But then I remembered I want my name in a gold picture frame/

Verse 2:

I wrote about killing kids and suicide/
so i can right a hard rap to beat this country side kid/
he said i didnt belong here and should go live in a zoo/
but he didnt have a clue that the villages, schools, people of are town were on my side rooting me on the way/
That after 2 weeks of practice I was ready to beat Samuel L. Ray/
This egotistic maniac is ready to meet a lyrical maniac face to face like kanye west and coldplay/
Lets take some bleach and a sponge because im about kill this ni99a its going to be a cold day/
This kid rapped about how I was gay and will never get laid/
I said ” by the way your nose is crooked your oranges are pealed, and the crowd was going my way/
Then he got mad like you give a mouse a oversized glass and started fussing like a baby kanye west or a baby eating clay/
The Solar rays were shinning on me and the rainbow was shinning on him like a sidewalk and a gay/
The fat lady sang she threw up all her food the crowd let out a cheer it was all me going thru the city/
everyone knew about me jay z, booker t, az, even P didy/
People thru australia, brazil all knew me even italy/
I guess thats what you get after perserverance/
I now have cloths there on clearance/
@ avv: hwat part didnt make sense

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dc [mf] May 20, 2011 at 2:14 pm

6/10

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{€Ж₳₡ɬ} May 20, 2011 at 2:26 pm

“I was a student of the game trying to Adventise my name to help the game/
Jay Z thought i was lame, Kanye West thought I was ok, but the response was still the same/” < -- try to cut that down
rap over D.O.A.

7/10 weird flow.
do mine and ill give you more advice
http://answers.yahoo.com/question/index;_ylt=AiLWii._30IMLiLkd.rEk_.u.Bd.;_ylv=3?qid=20090623124112AAGC7ZE

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Sean (Hip Hop Renaisance) May 20, 2011 at 2:27 pm

You need better terminology read some more books and you’ll do fine. 7/10

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Matthew The Messiah May 20, 2011 at 2:53 pm

My friend I will rate it a 5/10 and I would like you to know that on my mixtape I will be rapping over Death To The Autotune.

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I live in the year 2419 May 20, 2011 at 3:49 pm

it got insanely repetitive each otha line has to end in a diff ryme coz it all eneded in “ame” so ima have to go with 4/10….but you kno i have trouble to…not a pro….like i can come up widda rymz purdy quick but have trouble spittin’ them

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Jack Kerorap May 20, 2011 at 3:52 pm

5/10. You need to broaden your vocabulary a bit. And work on your flow. And don’t make sh*t up (ie. Jay-Z thinking you’re lame, everyone knowing you, etc)

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